Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The question of whether higher education is more important than work experience in terms of acquiring a decent job has been a matter of debates for many decades. In my opinion both tertiary degree and previous experience at work are important, would a person want to get a dream job.
For centuries people highly valued the great importance of educational system and of bachelor and higher degrees, in particular. It is hard to overestimate the positive impact of attending a university for the following reasons. First of all, colleges and universities provide their students with academic and profession-related knowledge, such as business and finance, psychology, biology, public health and many more. Secondly, these institutions give the attendees a unique opportunity to build useful network, which can help in one’s future career growth. And last, but not least, universities prepare young people for the adulthood, reducing the stress one might face at his/her first job.
At the same time, there are skills, which educational organizations cannot develop in students, such as time management, team-lead qualities, communication skills and so on. These are skills that are naturally evolved as a result of practical cases that an employee comes across at work daily basis. Of course, there are classes taught at universities which give theoretical knowledge on how to build up those skills, but those can only be learnt when being actually implemented.
Another advantage of gaining experience in a company is the industry-related expertise. In other words, while working in a firm the employee is able to deepen their knowledge and specialize in a certain field, whereas colleges mainly provide a more general view on various industries and spheres.
To conclude, I think both theoretical and practical knowledge is important for getting the desired job and just like in any other question, a balance should be maintained.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether higher education is more important than...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...ge on how to build up those skills, but those can only be learnt when being actually impl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, i think, in particular, of course, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39016393443 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04621043451 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626229508197 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6840344902 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23151032552 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705989501483 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528670935447 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122524746126 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518025484568 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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