Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that, in the current modern world, people are asked to provide private details while applying for the job. It is agreed as necessary, by the certain part of people, but remaining belief it could be a threat on some day.
On the one hand, there are jobs which require personal data to evaluate whether that particular person is suitable for the work, such as, the professions which are applicable only for the particular gender. Moreover, plenty of companies prefer to understand the eligibility of a candidate, through their personal interest, with respect to the job.Also, for most of the nighttime jobs, organizations do not show fascination to the married person.For example, call center jobs are most suitable for the men as well as the person who is single.
On the other hand, providing the personal details to an unknown person can lead to a perilous situation. For instance, due to the vast growth of technology, it is even possible to get the bank details using personal information, which is a huge loss for any individual. Furthermore, asking data irrelevant to the job is a serious concern for the public, which shows companies are sometimes prejudiced.
To conclude, organizations can collect personal information, if it is essential for the job. Collecting private data without a reason is an enormous issue, so the government should enact the law to stop these kinds of activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03829787234 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87983576817 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0039122553 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.555555556 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2222222222 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304248088386 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120779396537 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626455424108 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168176898717 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516465675131 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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