Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
As of recently, home-schooling has become a frequent topic of heated debate. While contested, many individuals argue that the best method of education is to teach children at home. Although there might be some complications leading to disadvantages, I profoundly believe that if moderated and applied correctly, a home-based education can be beneficial and constructive.
From a primarily social standpoint, going to school allows a more obvious form of interpersonal interactions to occur. The most popular motion against home-schooling is based on the idea of a child receiving education at home will create a deficit of human interactions and often lead to problems such as social anxiety or even development of autistic attributes. In general, children who attend school are more likely to be socially active and have a better understanding of social relations. As an instance of this, Philippines has restricted almost all practices of home-schooling intending to boost pupil collaborations.
On the other hand, re-purposing educational methods to conduct a child's tutoring at home is unprecedentedly frequent and successful. Records show that contrary to popular belief, homeschooling not only is as successful as its counterpart but also it can be better tailored to meet the needs and requirements of a child with certain conditions, given that the practice is well monitored and moderated. Latest surveys illustrate a growing success rate with children whom require special care and are being taught at home. Following this trend, there are now counselors who specialize in these affairs and are appointed to families practicing homeschooling in order to oversee and manage the pupil education.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I can ascertain that the benefits of homeschooling far outweighs its drawbacks. Although there can be disadvantages regarding socialization, provided that acceptable methods and professional supervision are in place, children can be efficiently taught at their own homes.
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also, but, if, regarding, so, well, while, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63344051447 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38317150051 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620578778135 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5732645501 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.769230769 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230445753139 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830810658133 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637978011302 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136957143969 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413747263532 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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