Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are
difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Many tourists choose to explore destinations with extreme climatic conditions which present them with extensive physical and psychological challenges. While this can enrich one’s life with rare learning experiences and exponential personality development, the potential risks involved also need to be considered.
Choosing challenging destinations like deserts or snow clad barren lands, for holiday provides many benefits. Firstly, an individual can fulfill his desire for adventure, excitement and thrill by exploration of an unknown territory. Every moment will be spent in anticipating the unexplored course ahead. As an example, one might have to face insects , scorpions or deadly animals during the journey. Secondly, such a quest will help an individual overcome some psychological barriers. For example, one has to win over the urge to give up, when weather conditions become unbearable and beyond endurance. The continuity in adverse conditions will increase will power astonishingly. Finally, new life skills are learnt in the process, and the individual will emerge with a new identity. He will be equipped with better adaptability and survival instincts, which will give him a 'never give in' attitude towards life.
On the other hand, these explorations need to be chosen after rationally assessing one’s existing capabilities, strengths and weaknesses. Some people might find these excessively physically and mentally demanding, thereby not being a judicious choice. Also, there might be lifelong and even irreversible implications of such decisions. For instance, some organ failure or even death might happen due to unprecedented situations and limited resources available to support in case of an emergency. Furthermore, every individual is different and while some enjoy the adrenaline rush produced by uncertain events, others might have a fruitful holiday while relaxing in trouble-free environment.
In conclusion, spending holidays in exploration of places like the Sahara desert or the Antarctica can prove to give life changing benefits, however the risks it presents should not be ignored, to avoid unpleasant consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02230483271 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.185797694 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68029739777 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3349425019 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825829930358 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026003605121 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284053739394 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513059187519 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193076197892 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.34 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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