Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your won knowledge or experiences.
In modern world, tourism has become an inevitable trend in most of the countries. In past, tourists just travelled to known places which had great tourist attractions. But now, tourists like to explore the nature more and more. Nowadays, more tourists tend to visit places which are more difficult to reach and which have harsh conditions during the journey rather than visiting to places which have great tourist attraction in general phenomena such as the Great wall of China ,the Taj Mahal in India , and the grand mosque in the UAE.This essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks for tourists who visit such dangerous and risky tourist destinations.
When it comes to tourism, there can be various reasons why tourists travel to these difficult destinations. The tourists who travel to these places can be known as risk takers. They like to take some risks in life and they want to check their ability survive in harsh conditions and their adaptation skills to such circumstances. These experiences help to enhance the leadership skills and various other skills of people which they need to be succeeded in their career lives.
Since, most of these kinds of tourist destinations are abandoned of general people, travelers are able to relax their mind as well as body during these journeys. This is a good way of enhancing your mental capability and you get a very good chance to enjoy the natural beauty of the environment in a minimalistic way. Other than that, these kinds of journeys help to improve self-satisfaction on achieving some of the hard tasks in tourism.
The biggest t disadvantage of these kinds of journeys is that tourists put their own life into risk in some of the occasions. Some of these tourist destinations are very dangerous and hard to travel. If I were to name a few – the Everest mountain, the Sahara desert ,the Amazon forest , and the Antarctic continent. Some tourists believe that some of the biggest achievements in their lives are hiking the Everest mountain, travelling through the Amazon forest , and spending few nights in a desert. These achievements can be seen as peculiar to the general public. Some of the tourists put their life into danger during these journeys without adhering to the particular rules and regulations properly.
Sometimes, I wonder why people like to take this much of risk in their valuable life. I can remember, once went on a water rafting excursion with my friends. That was one of the dead full experiences I have ever had in my life so far.There are one to Five grades of water rafting , where level one is the basic entry level. We did level one rafting during our journey and I was got shocked and astonished when I saw that some of the tourists participated for level five rafting which is very hard to do and dangerous to your life even. This is a good incident to show that travelers love to experience hard and harsh conditions during their journeys.
In conclusion , it can be stated that even though there are lot of benefits for the tourists who do dangerous , hard, and harsh travelling ,these benefits do not supersede the enormous value of their life , because these journeys may lead to loss the life tourists in some unpredictable conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 41.998997996 198% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2699.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 551.0 315.596192385 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89836660617 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66432914855 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4555353902 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 831.6 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.3137296842 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.347826087 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9565217391 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04347826087 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237684389804 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665904500912 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825594536667 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125210554381 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113947801422 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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