A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Building a factory near a place would definitely bring some advantages and disadvantages to a place. Some people believe that it is good to live in such a place because of the advantages that it brings to the environment such as bring more job opportunities and decreases the number of unemployment; others would disagree. In my view it is bad to build a factory near a place where I live for the following reasons.
First and foremost, a factory will bring lots of pollutant to the area. A factory will make a lot of noise and will definitely add a lot of pollutant to the air and water. For example, I lived in a small town in India when I was a child. I remember how beautiful the town was before building a car factory there. People were hospitable and they always were kind with each other. It was a clean quiet place without any pollutant. When I was 11, they start building a car factory. After some time, our beautiful small town started to grow. Many people come to the town to find a job. It was not only the factory, some months after building the factory they started to build some recreational areas such as parks, cinemas and lots of restaurants. This increasing industries brings lots of noises and air pollution to the city. After some years even the water that we used to drink become polluted and many people became ill. So, now the city need more doctors and so on. Now our quiet clean city has become a huge bustling metropolis which has air pollution problem most of the time. So as you can see a factory changed a beautiful town to a notorious horrific city.
Second, building a factory in a place and all the population that it attracts, the problems that people facing does not only limited to the pollution. People will come to the town from different places with different cultures and religions. With growing the city, People barely know each other. So with migrated population they will become some thieves. People will not feel as safe as they felt before. For instant, I read in the news paper that the enormous problem that people in developing cities are facing is lots of thieves and criminals that are coming with the added population. Thus, as it is clear, the factory will bring a lot of unsafety to the place.
In sum, though some people may believe that having a factory in their neighborhood have brings lots of cons to them, but as you can see the disadvantages of having such a place in our neighborhood overweigh the advantages. I think governments should force the owners of these companies and factories to build them in a distance place from towns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pollutant seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of pollutants'.
Suggestion: lots of pollutants
...irst and foremost, a factory will bring lots of pollutant to the area. A factory will make a lot ...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pollutant seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of pollutants'.
Suggestion: a lot of pollutants
... a lot of noise and will definitely add a lot of pollutant to the air and water. For example, I li...
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Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'were'.
Suggestion: were always
... there. People were hospitable and they always were kind with each other. It was a clean qu...
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Line 2, column 772, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'bring'.
Suggestion: bring
...restaurants. This increasing industries brings lots of noises and air pollution to the...
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Line 2, column 1082, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...air pollution problem most of the time. So as you can see a factory changed a beautif...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'limit'
Suggestion: limit
...oblems that people facing does not only limited to the pollution. People will come to t...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...felt before. For instant, I read in the news paper that the enormous problem that people i...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun unsafety seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of unsafeties'.
Suggestion: a lot of unsafeties
... as it is clear, the factory will bring a lot of unsafety to the place. In sum, though some peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, i think, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57296137339 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5578363965 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442060085837 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1460692167 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9259259259 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2592592593 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96296296296 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115432205248 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377250397539 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045166518892 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843460654161 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306179455893 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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