A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
A construction of a factory could have a negative effect on a community and result in increased traffic jams and noise pollution. However, a new industry might economically benefit a place. If a company is going to build a plant next to my town, I would definitely support the idea. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, a new factory could provide a lot of employment for local professionals and unskilled people. A large facility needs a myriad of workers to operate it and so students, who are able to work only part-time shifts might be hired. When pupils have a job, they less dependent on their parents and can afford a lot of staff. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a senior, my hometown was underdeveloped and high school students did not have job opportunities. Although my parents gave me some cash every day, this was not enough to purchase all things that I wanted such as mascara and nail polish. If I had had a job, I would have been financially independent and could have bought whatever cosmetics I needed. That is why I think that a new industry would be advantageous for young people, who live in my community.
Secondly, a construction of a factory could contribute to an overall development of my small town. Since a plant needs a plenty of workers, people from adjacent cities could move there. Therefore, new stores, restaurants, gas stations, and even hospitals might be opened. For instance, back in the day, my uncle told me that when a factory was built in his community, many workers from all around a district relocated there and his town started expanding. As a result, today his community is a huge city with a variety of schools, clinics and fire departments, and all of them have modern equipment and in this way, the quality of life there is better than in neighboring towns. This example illustrates how the building of a factory can help a community to evolve.
To conclude, if a construction of a plant has announced in my hometown, I would endorse it. This is because this would create employment for local students and could facilitate the development of the place.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69250645995 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86172414981 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.016937015 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129646493733 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409152418685 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342911754636 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830013055446 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210531053345 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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