A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Industrialization is known as the main engine for the developing countries like Bangladesh. Without it overall economic development is not possible, which is the ultimate target of every nation. Some people advocates for establishing new factories around the community. Other group opposes it. In my views, a new factory near our community is a positive addition for mainly two positive reasons.
The first reason is that the newly established factory will generate new employment. The company will recruit workers for building the infrastructures, establishing the machineries and this will generate employment in our locality. It will also attract new business in my area. For example, the forward linkage business and backward linkage business will be created based on this new factory. The firm also engaged people for manufacturing and marketing their products, which will create employment and certainly contribute to the overall development of the country. Moreover, it will also reduce anarchy in the society. For example, few years back in my friend’s town, a new fish processing industry was establishing. Almost everyone was opposing the decision of government because it would degrade the environment in that area. But the authority was determined about it’s decision and built the firm by taking appropriate measures so that it don’t affect the environment. After that the overall economic activity increased, which leads to significant development of that area. Therefore, without industrialization socio-economic development is not possible.
Another reason is that the initiation of a new firm will increase the tax revenue of government. This added revenue could be used for infrastructure development of my locality. In this regard, I want to share my experience, which a compelling example of this. Few years’ back, I was posted to a small town and at that time, the local government gave the permission of establishing a food processing industry in that area. But at the beginning, a group of people was opposing the decision by saying that it will create noise and add traffic in that area. But after the establishment of the firm, the scenario changed. The local government was earning more taxes and all these revenues had been used for the development of roads, community centers, play grounds, which helped to increase the welfare of the people of that area. As you can see, these developments would not be possible without the permission of establishing the firm.
In conclusion, I support the decision of establishing the factory in my area. The factory will not only create employment but also it will contribute to the overall development of people of this area. Therefore, every city should attract new firms such as the firms of our community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2362.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34389140271 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1203811508 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457013574661 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1674820196 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4814814815 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3703703704 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48148148148 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109328487855 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372543587494 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417522615547 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924797529279 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415058089578 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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