Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In universities, beside major course, students should have some lateral classes. Taking the history course is one of those courses that in many universities, without respect to the field of study, is essential for graduation; however, some people criticize this way, they are of the opinion that students should only focus on major courses. Personally, I believe that taking history course for any one could be helpful. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I am going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, studying history helps us to love our country and proud of it. By history we will have a solid understanding of our country that eventually will lead to a good motivation for us to study and try more. By reading scientists and great people’s life history, maybe we find our interests; moreover, some times these people’s history are able to affect our personality and raise it. For instance, when I was an elementary student, in history class by reading about Denis Ritchie life, I have been interested in computer science and algorithms and decide in the future to be a great computer scientists like Professor Ritchie.
In a nutshell, one of the advantages of taking history class is that it has a big power in motivation and directing mind to find our interests.
History is a great teacher for humans; most of events along the human history are repeated. By awareness of history, we are capable to have insight about the future; we can prevent the occurrence of bad events; furthermore, learn from a lot of experiences that are written in history books. Some days ago, I read an article from a major journal, a tough mathematical problem that for a long time scientists had been trying to solve it, have solved by a method from a historical book belong to 500 years ago. This obvious example, depicts that history is like a magical mirror, we can see the past and future. Now with this great tool, we are able to make better decisions.
Taking history course has some advantages for students. History can induce them to be more efficient and hard worker; in addition by digging scientists' life find their interest field. Finally, we can learn from history and use of a bunch of experiences that presented in history books.
In conclusion, I think, it is essential for each student to be aware of history and his/her country’s great people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the events') or simply say ''most events''.
Suggestion: most of the events; most events
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89731051345 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74211891959 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520782396088 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0975995164 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.277777778 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15554941554 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602472003708 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383763410838 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918107571795 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464748124956 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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