Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this progressive and sophisticated world, attending universitites is one of the crucial factors for the young. With this in mind, universities ought to select their curriculum carefuly to achieve their goal. When it comes to this point, people have some debates as to whether all students should take in history or not. Personally, though, I believe that learning history is crucialy important for students, and in what follows two reasons will be discussed to shed light on this idea.
First and foremost, history is one of the important ways to recognize the culture and the body of society. In fact, students ought to be familiar with their culture and their past generation because these past phenomena shape their today's personality and lifestyle. For instance, importing peper from asia have had a several impacts on the cooking habit of Europian people. If European had not imported peper, they whould not be able to cook spicy food. Consequently, knowing about the past events which have had a great effect on our life, is very important to realize our today life.
Another reason is that studing history make students able to analyse their life ,and ready them to make better decision. On the other hand, students who are aware of the history of their country, are more able to take participate in the political issues efficiently. For example, mayors in the history of our country have had an arrey of corruptions. Today whith being familiar with this fact we are very carefule about choosing mayors, and all the time we try to assess the mayor's activities so as to exposing the mayor economic corruptions.
To sum up, based on all the argument stated above, I srongly think that history courses should be mandatory in universities because with learning past events, students are able to manage social and political problems and they find the sourse of their personality and their lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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... we try to assess the mayors activities so as to exposing the mayor economic corruptions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03773584906 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61700221727 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3083913255 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213777911519 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726395041181 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574931066331 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142056646594 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444420016393 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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