Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
history is a kind of the essential title in every society, and it has a profound influence on people. I firmly believe that, taking a history course in universities play a crucial role because of culture and experience, and the government should devote enough budget to support it.
First of all, of course it goes without saying that culture has a great impact on society. culture
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our ritual, ceremonies, local music, dress, dance, food and rules that adopted in our generation. some of them are still happen is some of the world, but some of them is dying off. Each of the countries even cities are known by their culture, so understanding cultures can help us to communicate with others. If we take history courses in our university, we will be able to know our culture, and adjust to it. For instance, in Kurdistan, one of the most important item among Kurdish people is about their dance. All of them, women and men, stand in a straight line and keep their hand and dance the same as each other while local music is listening, it
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their cohesion among them.
Secondly, history can have an influence on the government. In the past, some politicians like Napoleon Bonaparte, hitler, Gondi and Shah Abbas, were successful because they had a great function in wars, in economies or in performing rules. Therefore, by using their strategies, the governments can become successful and have a better function in different situations. In addition, some politicians made mistakes in the past which the government can use those experience, and avoid doing wrong that happened at that time. For instance, the German's government adopt some hitler's strategies in their military operation to become win in wars that is going to happen.
Although, some people believe that, it is not necessary to take history courses in universities, I am of the opinion that, the governments were profoundly affected by history because of previous culture and experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00303951368 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73661580525 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6220600159 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144362739069 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474815371527 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375503855054 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766681236847 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288214164266 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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