Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that universities play an important role in teaching students. they teach them not only their specific speciality, but also they contribute in adding different types of knowledge, such as behavioral things, arts and history. In my view, history courses is very important for the student, so I think all universities students should be required to take it no matter what their field of study is.
First, history represents our origin and our culture. In response, we should at least have the minimum knowledge about it. Consequently, we can use this knowledge as a basic for improving our country in many fields. For instance, my sister is an archeticture student. she also has a passion in reading history books. Now, she is working to finish her graduating project using old Romanian castle as a templet to build a modern and fancy resturant. Her professor likes the idea, and he is encouraging her to participate in the national competetion for archetict because she has high chance to win.
Second, studying one field in the university might be boring for the students, and adding historical courses to their study will add kind of change to the routinely schedule they have. Moreover, historical classes have intresting information that can change students mood and inspire them to be creative in their fields.
If we go back to the example above about my sister's project, we can see how creative her project was. The resturant that she wants to build is one of it's kind in this area. it helps her to be in one of the most important competitions in our area. In addition to that, I am certain that it will achieve great success and she will earns alot of money from this resturant after the opening.
To sum up, I think all university students should be required to attend history courses not only because the benifit of having these courses in improving our country, but also it is interesting to learn about what happened in the past. In fact, I suggest that the university should represent specialized historical courses, such as the medical field history or teachers history. student will be excited to take these courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, at least, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87978142077 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71235385739 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3951531877 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261032493194 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745712174612 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981737907922 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155242297339 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105051390293 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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