Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The rate of seismic changes in numerous fields of technology has resulted in an ever-shifting world in which it is becoming increasingly challenging to get adapted to new conditions. More than any time in history we as a human beings are being exposed to quick movements of scientific frontiers. In my view, As a result of this unstoppable torrent of new innovations people have become less satisfied with their situation than people who went before us. I feel this way for two main reasons which I am about to explore in the following essay.
To begin with, The level of expectations of individuals has risen massively due to more relatively relaxed nature of life today. To be more specific, since people feel unrestricted by previously cumbersome responsibilities they now desire higher living standards. For instance, my late grandmother, Who passed away recently, I always used to tell me how convenient they were in face of innumerable hardships they had to encounter on a daily basis. From ordinary chores like preparing food, obtaining drinkable water from local rivers or streams to catastrophic conditions that they were in during frequent epidemics or two major world wars. Seeing their dire circumstance, they chose to fight on instead of yielding to the seemly unbearable pressure life imposed upon them. Residents of villages would come to each other's aid when necessary, at times that in this day and age would be lunatic to do so. Consequently, by their collective effort, they were able to come on top of the difficulties they faced and, as a whole make a better future for generations to come.
Secondly, Nowadays we are bombarded by brand new products and services that are supposedly introduced to render a better life for us. However, as a matter of fact, a huge portion of these innovations are of no practical use for most people. Companies, through incessant advertising, strive for creating unreal demand for what they manufacture, in order to maximize profits. My uncle's experience is a good example of this. Being only a month since he has married, he along with his wife are trying their best to furnish their house with the most luxurious furniture and equipment possible. However, this has turned out to be an extremely complicated undertaking for them, because there are multifarious brands and products one can choose from each with various features that are not really needed.
In sum, I hold the view that owing to blitzing turn of events in our world, it is not a simple task to feel at ease with your life.Not only abundance of the things we need have resulted in unreasonably higher expectations but also, fake demand is being constantly induced among many.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98230088496 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87771228131 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62389380531 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1511296231 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.111111111 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186827364366 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500555190323 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497940114358 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103572920087 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429941642426 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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