Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
One of the most challenging question in human's life is attributed to the actual source of happiness. There are various definition for happiness which are presented by people because of diverse perspective they have. Some proponents believe that people in the past were happier. In my point of view, today people are less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. I feel this way for two reasons which are elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is conspicuous that technology has improved the standards of living; on the other hand, it has isolated people because they are in hurry most of the time and do not have enough time to share with their family members and friends. In the past most of the people were in touch with their family members and friends frequently; moreover, families were extended. Thus the lack of communication cause some unpredictable problems such as the lack of happiness. Nowadays people spend most of their time to obtain much more money to have a better life and support their families. Furthermore, today's children are alone and share their time with devices like laptop and cellphones. These technological advancements lead children to be alone and not to be able to have friends and make valuable friendships.
The second reason why I have this point of view is related to increased importance of money. In my opinion, these progressed devices and large amount of money that enables people to buy anything they like provide short-term happiness. The true happiness is not obtained by having material possessions; it seems to me that, making other people happy by helping them and sharing more time with people we love are the main source of happiness.
Another perspective that I want to look at it as well is that the change of the world and technology advancements lead people to have a comfortable life and to have more opportunities in order to be happy including the ease of traveling to distant areas, accessibility to a huge amount of information through the internet, to name but a few.
The main conclusion that can be drawn from the all mentioned arguments is that, the change of the world provide not only valuable choices to make life happier and easier but also make people alone and isolated. In other words, the sources of happiness that are provided by advent of technology are short-term ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92079207921 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71948045835 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485148514851 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8308386085 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.941176471 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311089539195 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102457331477 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113581378634 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165515035555 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976049607005 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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