Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
By and large, No one can neglect the fact that technological advancements have a galloping pace. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion about whether people who live in this modern society are happier than their ancestors. Some people may hold the view that people are now less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. I personally strongly believe that Those who live these days are more satisfied and happier than before. In the following, I will elaborate on this for three reasonable reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that it is generally agreed that those who live today have more chance to access medical facilities. luckily, not only did people's knowledge about their lifestyles elevate but also people have more feasible access to the latest facilities and venues like hospitals and casualty rooms. Take my experience as an example, I can remember that when I was a young child, our family never had access to any professional and physician or even any well-equipped hospital. Meanwhile, nowadays thanks to industrial and medical advancements most of the individuals who live there have the opportunity to take full advantages of these venues.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that people are less required to take tough situation job like mining. No one can reject the fact that according to develop modern and versatile robots people are less involved in these dangerous and damaging careers. According to a recent study that has been published in Time magazine, more than 80 percent of individuals who worked as a miner in iron and copper mines suffered form healthy problems. Additionally, this research has shown that using modern robots not only paves the way for increased efficiency but also enhance life longevity and positively impact on workers expectations.
Finally, yet importantly, the economic wellbeing of people developed thanks to the industrial developments. It is generally agreed that those who live today have a better financial situation. Accessing to latest discoveries and finding help people to climb their carrier ladder more easily. even though it is understandable that there is a stiff competition among business owners, technological advances paved the way for making more money. Take Alli Daei as an example, he is one the most popular and thriving merchandises of pistachio around the world. I recently his biography and according to his statements, today he can easily travel to various parts of the world during the day with his personal plane. It is also mentioned that social media apps like Telegram and Facebook opened a door to advertise their products more easily than past. In another word, he really believes that technological developments open doors for being an international transporter and exporter more possible.
In brief, based on the aforementioned reason one can logically draw the conclusion that living in modern developed are more rewarding and people who live nowadays are more satisfied than those living in the past. However, there are other reasons and examples, challenging these claims and examples. All in all, it is highly recommended that a survey can assess the profound results of technology and developments in people's lives and their satisfaction.+
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Suggestion: Even
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, so, well, while, in brief, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2792.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24812030075 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84645309319 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522556390977 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 898.2 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5965238179 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259354015613 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735772880029 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111987595684 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156576962017 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953380700274 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 86.8835125448 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.