Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
In civilized and industrialized societies, world changing has been always among primary concerns of human being's lives. Today it is axiomatic that, people usually elapse their time to do their daily activities and they are busy to think deeply about their life quality. A plathora of people possess the conviction that the living in situation which world is changing quickly is better than changing slowly, whereas others might hold exactly the opposite view. Whether one agrees or disagrees with this, depends on the lens through which one is looking. I firmly endorse the former conviction instead of the later one. In what follows, I am going to aptly delve into the most outstanding reasons to advocate my view point.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that in such a circumstance, changing in all of aspects of life will improve human's characteristics in various majors. It is undeniable that whoever has the same experience in his or her life. It should be stressed that learning skills from the life lessons is one of the key factors in living. Therefore, go with this flow of changing will be benefical. The more time elapses, the more they realize that updating is very significant point in the modern era. In my own experience, the people who I know them are pleased with this issu which world changing is occuring so fast.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that people not only accept this change speed but also want to make it fast to achieve much more facilities and new things. Accordingly, I can expand it in whole people of the world and say that they are satisfied with this happening. For instance you can see even in old guys that they are coming with technology improvements such as the new smarts phones or something else.
To put it in briefly, all the enumerated reasons lead us to the conclusion that world changing quickly not only cause to people sence less satisfied of their life, but also make them more satisfied than the past. However, a paramount issue which must be mentioned is that this can not be used as a prescription for everybody and some counter examples might exist, which are not mentioned above. As a result, I suggest conducting more surveys and estatistical studies to answer this question more precisely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, briefly, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in brief, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90281329923 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61712693973 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562659846547 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6685396828 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255767065234 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723681777904 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764614029631 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150271772704 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322084874786 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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