Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their life than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.
As all of us know, the world is observant of many changes in many different scientific or non-scientific fields. Some changes are because of human activity, and some others are naturally. We should notice that these changes could be positive or negative. However, I disagree with the statement that people now are less happy or less satisfied with their life than people were in the past because of changes. I feel this way for some reasons positive changes and more care about people's happiness are my reasons that I’m going to discuss below.
First of all, I should mention that many positive changes help people to have a better lifestyle and get more happy that people who had lived in that past had never experienced such a good thing. Makes people life considerably enjoyable. Take medical changes, for instance. Medical changes come up immensely helpful and rescue and preserve many people’s lives and prevent them from demise. My grandpa has a terrible experience that one of his daughters had been died because of a simple cold. But now we have never heard someone Dead because of having a cold. This declining death rate is because of the positive changes happening. So people should be happy because no one won't die because of a simple disease.
Moreover, In recent decades, many people's satisfaction and advocation organizations have been opened to tack care about people's happiness. In other words, they search about new changes, their influence on people, and if they find a change harmful or dangerous for people, they could conduct changes in people's happiness direction. Take social organization, For instance. They usually monitor any striking differences, and if it seems helpful, they often are emerged by a supportive role and vice versa. The past people never used to see such a strong champion because of their satisfaction intention.
In a nutshell, I should mention that I discussed on the relation between people's happiness and the world’s fast changes. I have proved changes usually cause joy to people because of positive, useful changes and take more care about people's happiness along with these changes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e world is observant of many changes in many different scientific or non-scientific fields. So...
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Line 9, column 449, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
...ferences, and if it seems helpful, they often are emerged by a supportive role and vice v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i feel, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14164305949 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65516630601 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3931837666 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357122869676 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107763600808 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128912718091 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234411977456 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897361877327 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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