Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
It is axiomatic that in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, mankind needs to devote a part of their life to travel and take advantage of its plus points. While many people hold the opinion that goes on a trip with a tour leader is better, on the other hand, some others believe that go on a vacation alone is the best choice. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former idea, and the reasons to support my idea are presented in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that individuals prefer to travel in their holidays in order to relieve themselves from the ups and downs of life. In fact, starting a journey could aid people to relax and forget their problems. In this vein, travel with a leader would be beneficial since a tour guide has a lot of discounts and coupons. As a result, passengers can save a huge amount of money because most of the discounts are available only for the tour guides since they have a good relationship with travel agencies. My own experience will bring this notion home. A few years ago, I decided to travel to the north of Iran in order to visit some historic monuments and enjoy picturesque mountains. When one of my co-workers found out that I wanted to go to the north, he suggested me to travel with a tour leader in order to spend lower money to visit museums and eating in restaurants. So I take advantage of travel with a tour guide and not only it helped me to gain tickets to visit tourist attractions but also I experience one of the best journies since I met new people and it prevents to feel boring during the trip.
Moreover, due to the fact that in these recent decades in many countries travel agencies have started to work, people are familiar with the tour leaders and travel with them. Since the tour guides are aware of many untouched places where people usually do not find them on any map. Accordingly, individuals can experience a memorable trip because they visit mysterious locations that it is not easy for common people to find them, and also the tour leaders have been working in this field for a long time, they have invaluable experience. For instance, 4 years ago, my family and I decided to travel to Kerman- one of the states of Iran where located between two deserts.
We started our travel with a tour guide that he was working in that place for more than 20 years, so due to the great experience in which he gained through these years, we visited locations that no one could find them even on the internet.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I do believe that using a tour leader is much more beneficial. Because people can benefit from coupons and the discounts provided by tour guides, and also they can explore places where it is hard to find for usual people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the tour leaders and travel with them. Since the tour guides are aware of many untou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53515625 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49137917926 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478515625 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9507108335 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229418120439 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778448795284 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517603266171 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126595452464 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441321186356 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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