Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Attending school is a very important part of anyone's life. People usually spend up to 12 years of their life in school. A very important aspect of a school is its gender system. Some people believe that boys and girls should be separated, while others think they shouldn't. I agree with the second view because of two reasons.
First, when children and teenagers grow up, they have to be active in society and therefore they must come into contact their opposite sex. I think it's better for them to know each other from their childhood so when they're grown up, they will know many things about each other, including how to treat and how to respect each other and this will be very helpful for them. For example, since I live in a Middle East country, Iran, which many people have conservative views here, I have attended those same-gender schools. I think that was a terrible experience. I came up with this conclusion when I entered university. In that time I figured out I knew nothing about girls, and I couldn't contact with them. I couldn't even have an ordinary talk with them or say greetings to them, because I always felt embarrassed. Although after a few years I overcame the feelings and started to date one of them, I always feel that the early years of my college could have been an amazing experience if I was comfortable with them.
Second, while this might be debating, I think high school can be a proper time for students to fall in love for their first time. I had a friend that studied in Europe and he told me about his first girlfriend and the good times that he used to have with her and how regretful it was for him to leave her. If I want to be honest I was always jealous with him and wished I could have same experience. I remember that at the university he was the one that many girls loved to have date with him, and sincerely this made me even more jealous.
Thirdly, I think if boys and girls tend to study together, they can be good friends and form communities and friendships that will help them a lot in their adulthood. For example my aunt migrated to U.S many years ago and my cousin studied high school there. They formed a group of computer-loving people, which was composed of boys and girls, the came into a great success in the next few years. I think finding such groups is harder in my country, since we don't have contact with half of the society in our early years of life.
So, in sum, I think it is better for children and their future life to attend schools that are not separate, which is a closer resemblance to real life. I hope that countries like my own country will have schools for both boys and girls, which will surely make their personalities better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, as for, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45090180361 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36419952623 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488977955912 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7907530836 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5652173913 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6956521739 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899532416724 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319055724509 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272927492739 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578071174234 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234891069322 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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