Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
In this question, we have to think a lot of access good conclusions. Each thing for communications that include phone, email, and letter as well as especially face-to-face communication has some advantages and disadvantages.In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
In the first place, these days with the rapid growth of high technology, computer, social communication programs, and so forth, people see each other rarely than past. I strongly believe that this happens is one of the most important disasters all around the world what people face to it. Not only do these communication software cause of divorcing but also they help people have more distance from together. For example, in the past, people spend most time to visit or speak with each other, and because of that, they like each other more. I believe that face-to-face communication gives us positive energy and positive energy plays a crucial rule in our life.
I want to mention important of face-to-face communication with another example. I had some problems with my girlfriend because of the fact that she wanted to finish our relationship. Therefore, in spite of the fact that I spent more time to convince her about her deciding, I cannot either convince nor calm her dawn. Because I spoke with her with SMS or Telegram (one of the social software what it becomes famous in our country these days). One day I decide to visit her for my goal, and I knew that she went to the Khoy ( she is from Khoy, mather's land is Khoy). I went to the Khoy by bus for visiting her. I could access my aim, so I could convince to continue our relationship. That day I knew the power of face-to-face communication.
All in All, after mentioning some reasons above, I strongly believe that face-to-face communication has more influence on people.
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...ace communication with another example. I had some problems with my girlfriend be...
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Suggestion: because
... I had some problems with my girlfriend because of the fact that she wanted to finish our relationship. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'continuing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: continuing
...ould access my aim, so I could convince to continue our relationship. That day I knew the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, in spite of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85942492013 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92723947177 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.19801855 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0625 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200444117988 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728397569426 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720566225595 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133365340884 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190789111787 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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