Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to support you
Nowadays one of the most concerns for youngsters is finding a proper job as due to the high competition they have a limited chance to get a job. one of the options is to choose their parents as their career. The controversial question that arises in this regard is that whether choosing the same job more benefited the youngsters than choosing different jobs from their parents. While some people are inclined towards the idea that choosing a different job from their parents more beneficial for young people. I am of the opinion that the advantages of choosing a similar job to our parents far outweigh its disadvantages. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the reasons and examples justifying my point of view.
The first reason coming to my mind is that following our parents' path in a career not only provides us with some valuable experiences but also with the knowledge that would benefit us in times of need. Over time people can gain experiences and knowledge that is resulted from hundreds of failures and triumphs. This process is very time and energy-consuming. Therefore, it seems more reasonable to choose our parent's careers to save time and resources by avoiding experiencing a lot of new things in person. For instance, someone who has established a company like his parents can benefit from their advice on how to attract more customers, how to produce high-quality products, how to manage to prevent loss and bankruptcy.
Another noteworthy reason is that one can achieve more success compared with their peers who choose different jobs than their parents. When you decide to continue your parents' occupation, you are more likely to start working from teenage age. Over time you have made a great amount of money. while your peers are studying to attend school, and then enter the job market which would take them several years. My own personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. As I spent most of the time of my life getting a higher degree to take on a high paid job, I have always broken by the end of the month, while a friend of mine enjoys the great money in his bank account as he worked with his father in a marker all of his life from adolescence.
From what has been discussed above, we can conclude that following our parents' job not only provides us with invaluable experience and a wide range of knowledge but also helps us attain more success in comparison to our peers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76066350711 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66710240389 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514218009479 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4924933764 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.611111111 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420718407765 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134646730903 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100807933385 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251037300946 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145109653587 0.0645574589148 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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