do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People attend universities or academic institutes for various reasons. Some people consider it as a challenge and others take it as a new experience. People gain knowledge in these places and be prepared for their future jobs and at the end become an expert. In my opinion, If you want to become successful in your career it's better to attend universities or academic institutes which foster you in a specific subject and make you an expert in that area. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs:
First and foremost, it is impossible for us to learn every aspect of many specialized subjects. Some scholars resemble this as a sea with a depth of one meter, it means your knowledge is not deep enough. If we want to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects, is good for our general information. But we have to be aware that it doesn't make us expert in that area so we can't make money out of it. Having a broad knowledge in many academic subjects is good if we are planning to participate in a TV contest
Second, We live in a world in which accessibility to lots of information is not too hard you can just google something, and in less than one second you can have the information. So having a lot of knowledge in many subjects doesn't make you special, if you want to find a well-paid career you need to know something which others don't have and this won't happen unless you are an expert in a specific subject.
Needless to say, there is no contradiction in being an expert and does have some knowledge in various areas, but for subsistence in our life, we have to be expert in one area at least.
On the other hand, one way to acquire knowledge and expertise in one area is attending university. University is a place which you can gain knowledge and be valuable to society. I strongly believe most people should attend university in order to get prepared for future jobs.
In conclusion, I believe having a broad knowledge in various academic subjects is not bad but it's not sufficient. We need to specialize in specific subjects, in order to find a respected profession and others could count on us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57702349869 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74659730213 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456919060052 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3536803829 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5625 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309899884598 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101570676211 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080074838902 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162535595947 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666106144099 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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