Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays societies are getting more and more complicated. Consequently, demand for experts is increasing and being expert in one subject is fundamental for successful career and life. Many people may believe that it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects, while others prefer to specialize in one specific subject. In my opinion, knowing many subjects and being expert in one them is the best, since, these two are complemental for each other
First, to be successful in a specific field, it is important to spend time and energy on that. However, when a person wants to learn many subjects, it is impossible for him to learn all of them profoundly. Since, for this purpose, the one should study various books, search different resources and gain experience in diverse methods. Therefore it is important to know one subject thoroughly and being aware of every minor detail about that. For instance, in dentistry, the doctor should know every aspects of a particular tooth in detail such as number of fissures, pits, cusps, roots, where depressions are located on teeth and many other details. This achievement cannot be gained without spending years in college and dental offices.
Second, trying to specialize in one subject, gives people enough time to get promotion at work. On the contrary, an employee who tries to know about different part a company and move from one department to another all of the time and circulate all around the company, will not have enough time to get stuck in one department and get promotion there. This person will never become a useful employee for that company and is in danger of being fired. So this is crucial for a company to have employees who try hard on one specific field.
On the other hand, these days, by development of multidisciplinary fields in technology and medicine, knowing only one subject does not guarantee success in one field. For example, a dentist need to know about technology of equipment needed in a dental office in order to ability to work properly and renew old equipment. In addition, a dentist should be aware of medical issues because diseases and drugs a patient consumes, affect dental diseases. Furthermore, it is not unusual for a dentist to face some medical emergency while performing dental treatment and he should have this ability to manage that situation. So, I strongly believe that in order to be a noticeable person in a field, it is necessary to learn about variety of subjects highlighted in that field.
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In conclusion, under this circumstances that the society and technology are progressing rapidly, people need to increase their experience in various fields, while spend most of their time on their major field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 335, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...and gain experience in diverse methods. Therefore it is important to know one subject tho...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...and move from one department to another all of the time and circulate all around the compa...
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Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... field. At least In conclusion, under this circumstances that the society and tech...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00438596491 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73291370673 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9415823579 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.105263158 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7894736842 5.45110844103 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167326785566 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060380661823 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860536042934 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974799423982 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833560838232 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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