Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
In today's modern and sophisticated world, friendship plays a vital role in people's lives. In this connection, people have different priorities when they want to choose a friend. Although contested by many that the matter of having an astute friend is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded as both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. I concur with the notion that friends should have a sense of humor, and I will analyze my reasons throughout this essay.
First, spending time with who has a good sense of humor is an ideal opportunity to forget life's difficulties. To be more specific, when people do fun activities, they can escape from their daily stress, leading to relaxation feelings. For example, when I was a high school student, I felt a considerable amount of stress because my assignments were complicated. After I made a friendship with one of my classmates who was a fun person, I had a pleasant time at school as she made me laugh. As a result, I could deal with my projects significantly sine my mental tensions were eliminated; moreover, I felt satisfies in life.
Second, one who has a sense of humor can communicate with others effectively, so it is essential to become friends with them. To elucidate, a funny person takes part in discussions readily as they are wonderful speakers who attract other people. According to my own experience, my son is a shy person; hence, he does not interact with his classmates successfully; however, one student is an outgoing person with improved communication skills. My son has a high tendency to establish a relationship with the fun boy because he does not notice the passage of time when talking to him. Therefore, having interaction with a humorous person appeals to him, so much so that he inclines to speak with him despite his introverted behavior.
To conclude, while there are several arguments on each side, I profoundly believe that it can be a plus to find a humorous friend. Not only do funny humans help others to cope with their stress, but they also appeal to others with their effective social skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers with their effective social skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89166666667 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93909235801 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2383134013 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.0625 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328641291249 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110671448857 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076122989961 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197097172368 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306039463176 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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