Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise.
Nowadays, most people might get stressed out because they feel pressure in their daily lives. There are assorted approaches to relieve the pressure. Some people are of the opinion that lie in a relaxed position and do an easy activity including reading an interesting book or watching an action movie while others hold an opposite point of view. Even though physical activities can help us to keep our bodies healthy, but I insist that doing an easy activity is a better option. In the following, I am willing to support my perspective by proposing two main arguments.
First and the foremost reason lies in the fact that we have to do something to keep our minds in a settled mood. There are scores of scientific researches that suggest our bodies influence on our mind. When we do a formidable task, our bodies release some chemicals such as adrenaline which change our psychological states. For example, the other day, I played soccer with several of my friends. In the middle of the game, I found out that I really got excited since I was trying to help my teammates to win the match. In that case, my mind was involved in a thinking process to reach its goal. However, for being relaxed, we should stay in a steady status. For instance, in the sleep, our nerves get relieved since they do not engage in a new process. I admit that some books or movies can take part of our mental processing capacity, but due to our bodies position, it creates a sense of overwhelming.
Another subtle factor rests on the notion that for being relaxed, our body should rest. People do different tasks every day. Some of them need their physical activities. For example, we have to walk to get to our workplace or do our chores. I concede that all of them might be easy, but when we do a number of them, our bodies get tired. As a result, we have to stay calm to restore our energy. Physical activities need special efforts that wear us out. Accordingly, we should not participate in those activities, especially when we are tired. In addition, we can benefit from reading a book. For example, I am interested in Emotional intelligence. Whenever I am tired, I read my books which raise my knowledge about this subject and I could modify my behaviors.
To sum up, I would like to point out that reading a book is a good choice for recreation. Not only have our minds an opportunity for getting relaxed but our bodies can also relieve its pain. Having an appropriate pleasure is necessary for being healthy. There are obvious differences between humans and machines. In fact, humans cannot work continuously. Therefore, we should consider our limitation in our daily activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69936034115 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66265631193 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535181236674 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.485243945 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0967741935 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1290322581 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96774193548 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140969246373 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366487668455 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423264219135 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951578737466 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405953739582 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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