Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it is impossible to be completely honest with your friend?
Throughout history, being honest has plays a crucial role in the societies. There are a lot of books in which has recommended that people should be honest with each other. A controversial question which arises here is whether people could be honest with their friends in any situation. I personally take the view that it is not a prudent course of action to be honest with others always. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represents a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, people always have something confidential in their lives, which means they should not speak with their friends about those secrets. To put it another way, these kinds of personal matters have nothing to do with others, and one may not tell them to anybody including their friends. There are a myriad number of people who have mentioned they are regret telling their secrets to their peers. My own experience is a case in point. Approximately three years ago, one of my friends asked me about a personal affair. Unfortunately, I confide in him and told all the detail. After two weeks, I noticed he had spoken with others about my secret, and almost every one of my friends knew about that. Therefore, I felt stressed and decided never tell my personal issue to others. Had I not told my secret to my friend, he would not have been encountered stress to such an extent.
The second noteworthy reason to be mentioned is that there are situations in which people cannot tell the truth in view of the fact that they may make their friends unhappy. In other words, sometimes people ask their friends for their opinion about something related to them, and if their friends tell the truth, they will face a lot of difficulties. For instance, they may ask their friends telling their opinion about the new car that they have bought, and it is not possible to tell them the truth if their friends don’t like that car. It goes without saying that telling the truth in some circumstance, will cause their friendship to tear apart. In the research conducted in my country in 2020, people were asked to express their viewpoint about always being honest with their friends. The results revealed that the more they were honest with their friends, the more they faced difficulties in their relationship. A great number of them announced that their relationship with some of their counterparts have finished due to the fact that they have voiced their real opinion.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that it is not possible for people to be frank with their friends in any circumstance because sometimes it has a dire consequence for them, especially when they say their secrets to their friends and they reveal it. Besides, sometimes people want their friends to express their opinion about their beloved belonging such as items they have bought recently, and if people don’t like that and say this to them, it will make them sad. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are some other reasons and examples, which are not mentioned above. Finally, it is suggested that a survey be conducted to find out whether the benefit of being completely honest outweigh the cost of not telling the truth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...urse of action to be honest with others always. To substantiate my point of view, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, in short, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2706.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 561.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54744351259 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447415329768 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 796.5 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7825298725 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.24 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.44 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175904835242 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690926184655 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601930886116 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14610399271 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720168438834 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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