Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In contemporary society, modernization is brought a new lifestyle for people which means that nowadays people are living utterly in a different way rather than who was living in the past. Many factors are influential in the humans` lives today. One of those prominent factors is the role of advertisement in people`s lives. Each company needs a good advertisement for selling its products and the company owners always are found to employ some advertisers who meet their expectations for the company. So, it is inevitable for advertisers to exhibit their products much better than they really are. I would like to put forward some of the most significant reasons to illustrate my standpoint.
First and foremost, this is more economically beneficial for companies to have an extended spectrum of consumers. Indeed, for attracting more customer and procure more money, they need to hire many expert advertisers who are capable for advertising their products much better. Vividly, advertisers should display just the good sides of products and ignore the flaws. This manner will attract more customers to the company, and they can acquire more money. In contrary, if the company advertisers exhibit the real quality of the products, there would be a decrease in the company`s financial benefits.
Moreover, there exists another factor that deserves some words here. In the marvelous world of technology, the professional competition between companies is increased. In other words, with the development of the variation of commodities and products, this is more plausible to have a strong advertisement for gaining profit. As an example, there are existed various kinds of electronic devices like mobile phones in society. But the most famous companies are Apple and Samsung because of their strong advertises. Albeit some other brands such as Huawei have the same value as Apple and Samsung, but it sells much less than those well-known companies just because of a feeble advertisement.
Last but not least, this is the nature of the advertisement to not being honest about the quality of products. As we all know, we can seldom find an advertisement which says that our product has some defects. So, all people in the society are aware of the purpose of advertisements. So, we should not worry about that some advertisements are misleading because we know that non-company do not say that our product is not good.
Having considered all the discussion above, I tend to claim that companies are more likely to advertise their products in a manner which makes products seem much better than they really are.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...that nowadays people are living utterly in a different way rather than who was living in the past....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, so, well, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21276595745 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93491938958 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520094562648 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3055478822 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.227272727 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2272727273 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04545454545 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17525475419 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053576024068 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694460510874 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118942309851 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713736797306 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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