Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
Life is full of unexpected difficulties. People, depending on the characteristics, react differently to problems. Some might give up easily after facing one or two difficult experiences. Others, on the other hand, not only don’t give in easily but also take advantage of those experiences and turned them into possibilities. I believe the vicissitudes of life can give a person precious lessons that no book or teacher can teach. I feel this for two reasons: people will learn and gain inner peace. I will explore the reasons in the following essay:
First of all, people learn how to react in similar circumstances. There are many times in life that you might face similar troubles. Sometimes you might repeat the same mistake twice; however, little by little, you learn how to tackle the problems with better and safer strategies. By a way of example, when I started working as a clerical worker around five years ago, job seemed like a nightmare to me. Every day, I had to handle a morass of paper works on my desk which was really frustrating. The errors I was committing every day were really disappointing to me and my colleagues. However, I learned from the errors and step by step became better at my job. I think, if it were not for the experiences that I gained on those difficult days, I would not be a successful employee today.
In addition to the knowledge people gain, by experiencing difficulties, they understand that all the problems are transient and gain more inner peace. Sometimes you see younger people get contentious and irate when the situation is not favorable to them. I think we can impute their behavior to their lack of experience. On the other hand, older and more senescent people keep calm and try to abate the tension without getting emotionally involved in it. For example, several years ago my father and brother started a business together. At the beginning of their work, my brother would get into fights with others and make rash decisions and he was stressed all the time. On the opposite, my father, based on his previous experiences, was very calm and polite with everyone and studying the business logically. Thanks to my father’s ability to deal with the difficulties with senerity, the business turned into a huge success to them.
In conclusion and on the basis of the above mentioned agreements, I would like to reiterate that I believe that difficult life experiences are valuable. I feel this because people learn how to react in the similar cases and because people gain more inner peace in general.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 505, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...people will learn and gain inner peace. I will explore the reasons in the followi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in general, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87643020595 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80593804899 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537757437071 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9867322755 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7916666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105976819621 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286730137437 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261897278647 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612970996959 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186171637915 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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