Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people can solve important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help of their families. Help from the government is unnecessary.
There are some moot points about whether people can solve their problem with themselves or they need governments to help. The question of authorities help has aroused as a subject of controversy subject among people. When it comes to my place, with weighing up the pros and the cons, I strongly subscribe to the point that governments help is necessary for people. I have some reasons the most outstanding of which will be explicated in the ensuing paragraphs.
Governments have authority, power, and fund, some of the big problems only will solve by these things, therefore, people in some situations need to help governments. As a case to the viewpoint, I vividly remember when I was a student at the university I had a project about the evaluation of the characteristics of soil layers in our town. Consequently, I needed some apparatus and instruments for this job which my university and I could not provide those things. Thus, I decided to send an envelope to the ministry of knowledge and investigation and requested for any help. The corollary of this action, led to they helped me and provided something else for my project. My personal experience competently corroborates to the point that governments help is necessary for some conditions.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that in some case for solving people big problem we need to governments permission and clearance. To be more specific, for solving people s medical care, governments help is compulsory. My personal example demonstrates this reality, two days ago I read the news in the newspaper, in the main article of that newspaper I perused that the medicine and medical help prices increased dramatically, due to these matters people need governments fund and investment in this situation. If people try to solve their arduous in this field they will not prosper and will be confronted with many difficulties. My personal example shed some light to the point that needless to say, the government help is very crucial in some situations.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that, governments help in some conditions is very vital because they not only have authorities but also have enough power and money to solve problematic issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nments have authority, power, and fund, some of the big problems only will solve by these t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02645502646 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0114234325 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521164021164 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8098002269 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251625662043 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973491593565 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885265113708 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169987012235 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834598003424 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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