Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Nowadays in is not important for people to have regularly family meals together

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays, in is not important for people to have regularly family meals together.

irrefutable, in this contemporary era competition is continuously going up. people can't even do rest properly. In my opinion having meal with family is great idea to reduce mental stress forge due to busy schedule. I feel this way for two reasons ,which i will explore in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, nowadays ,some pupils live separate owning to many factors .it could be study or job .A lot of children live outside for academic courses and same with employee . they must steal some time and sit among family members. Consequently they feel good .my own experince is the evidence .Two years ago when i was living in city to acquire my higher education ,whenever i felt bored or frustrated i always used to come at home i did plethora of gossips with my parents while taking favorite meal at dinning .this moment heal my brain.

secondly , to have meal together with family and other society member would create great bond and strengthen cultural values. To exemplify , i am living in a small town with my family. In this town people from other states too and as well as from other religion ,at Diwali we distributes sweets among all pupils and in same way at christmas my neighborhood also invite us on their christmas party .we learned about their culture and had much fun . As a result it give us a big opportunity to know each other very closely and this help to build trust among all society member.
To the final reckoning i tend to reiterate, i am totally agree with the statement . even though no one have is free in this modern world ,everyone must try to spend a little bit time with family and friends and dinning table is best place to share whole day conversation . it not only help to overcome tensions but also provide time to understand people nearby us and learn new culture.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, i feel, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6625 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48006087544 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.9365257169 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 60.0 5.5376344086 1083% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21944853459 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746363789358 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567614286642 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128929416016 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395531021791 0.0645574589148 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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