Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Obviously, parents are one of the first teachers we have in our lives in most cases. Parents are deeply involved in their child's education and development as they teach how to speak, to walk and also instill good values in their minds. However, recently there has been an ongoing debate on whether parents are the best teachers compared to professional teachers. In my opinion, parents cannot replace the role of professional teachers as they are not trained to teach. Also, parents tend to be biased by the love of their children, which could negatively affect them.
First of all, since parents did not get professional training as professional teachers, they could be misleading. They may pass on incorrect or biased information to their children or implement wrong sense of values. Moreover, as parents are not experts in the field of education, they are find difficulties in understanding their child's emotions and behavior. For example, there are many parents who use physical punishments to educate their children without considering children's emotions and side effects it causes. As a result, children will have the impression that their parents would not understand them. Also, if children get used to physical abuse, they will show violent behavior. Moreover, children tend to imitate their parent's behavior without assessing it. Inexperienced parents sometimes expose inappropriate behavior to their children which could mislead their children. For instance, if children see their parents using harsh language and swear words, they are likely to use such bad words to other people without acknowledging it is a wrong behavior. Therefore, professional teachers are better than parents since they are valid and reliable.
In addition, parents tend to be biased by the love of their children. So wishing good things and an easy life may prevent children from maturation. In any case, parents usually can present only one viewpoint of the world, while good teaching should be based on different attitudes. Thus, when children go to school and have a great diversity of teachers, they learn much more than their parents could probably give them. Furthermore, parents may spoil their child if they become too generous to them. If a child makes a mistake and parents are hesitant to scold their child, children would not learn from his bad behavior and also become ill mannered. However, professional teachers could lead and correct children without any bias. For example, parents may back their child up in a quarrel in any cases. But professional teachers are able to identify children's misbehavior and correct them without any bias.
In conclusion, I believe that parents are not always the best teacher for children. This is because they are unskilled in teaching and be biased by the love of their children.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in any case, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2371.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21098901099 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69737043612 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479120879121 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2633412314 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1923076923 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.34615384615 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946818493006 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039078608951 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276938739595 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073646245736 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165711487899 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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