- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without any shadow of doubt, parents play an important role in our lives. They are with us since the first day and know us better than anyone else. Some may hold the view that our parents can teach us topics that no one else could teach, but others have a negative attitude toward it. Even though some people might believe that our best teachers are the ones we have in schools and colleges, un my view, parents are the best teachers in our lives. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following statement.
First of all, our parents know us from day one. They know every single behavior about us. They know which subjects and topics they children are interested in, which method of learning is working better for them and they know how much time they need to learn a new skill. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have a cousin who recently turned seven and has been starting his first year in school. Their teacher taught them the alphabet with a writing method and asked the students to memorize the alphabet while they are learning how to write them; but, my cousin could not memorize it. My aunt, who knows him better than his teacher, helped him memorize very letter by giving him examples with a hearing method. As you can see, because his parent knows him better, she could thaught him to learn better than his teacher.
Secondly, parents are the child's heroes; children copy almost everything that their parents do because of the love and respect that they have for their parents, and also they are the first idols that they have in their lives. For instance, When I was four and I was going to kindergarten, I used to fight with one of my friends over toys. Our teacher tried so hard for weeks to reconcile us, but there was no success. After a while, she contacted our parents and told them the situation; I remember that my mother sat down with me and explained to me why this is not good behavior. Immediately, I understand the situation and make peace with my friend. This experience taught me that sometimes a parent can do somethings that nobody else could.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, not only our parents are the most important people in our lives, but also they are the best teacher that we could have in our lives. This is because they have known us since the day we were born and they know us better than anyone else and can teach us things that they know we will need in our lives; and also, because they are our childhood heroes and we love them so we listen to their word and advice. Indeed they are the best teachers anyone ever had.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 103.0 43.0788530466 239% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46887966805 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1575935589 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466804979253 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.051614121 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103875891686 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394153867252 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255014166157 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732858397997 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328149093923 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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