Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
No one can deny the importance of children' s education as an improvement in their future living life. In this regard, people' s opinions are divided as to whether today parents are more involved in their children' s education or not. It is my firm conviction that today parents are more concerned about children's school and spend their time for this issue even with numerical tasks and responsibilities. For a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
My primary reason is that parenting is not giving birth a baby like past time and new parents are more responsible for children' s living standards. Today, it is commonly believed that people can reach to broaden vision with success in education. It is true that this statement doesn' t give a strong guaranty for everybody but it plays an increasingly important role in kid' s future. Drawing from my own experience my parents haven' t any significant attention to our education and we tried so hard for completing and preparing our mission without any help. But my sister now spends time for her daughter' s education and pursue her grades carefully. Moreover, she is concern about her homework and tried to help her in management educational materials well although she has responsibilities as client in the bank.
Secondly, most parents have an academic education and are familiar with worth of science in life. Educational people are more respectful in society and in some situations offer them great jobs opportunity.
Statistics, the number of refers as a paternal follow-up in fifty elementary schools in New York city rise up to 58 percent more than four years ago. So as you can see, educational parents have widen horizon compare with parents in the past.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that today parents have more interaction with their children. Not only due to the fact that most of them are educational but also for being more reliable and responsible in modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96142433234 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8755102507 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563798219585 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7597130332 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317351603386 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109384506737 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843829744329 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188610729243 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481131555255 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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