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No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of traveling to their own country or foreign countries. But I would definitely persist on traveling on the own country. It is my firm belief that traveling in the own country has more benefits from different and wide viewpoint. For a number of reasons, I would like provided some supporting evidence in the below passage.
One of our primary reason is that traveling in their own country is cheaper and families can spend less money for transportation in traveling and instead spend their money on entertainment and traditional dishes for spending a delightful journey. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience.
You see, last summer we have enjoyable traveling to some of the earliest cities near my own city and we spend less money for transportation in traveling and instead we spend our money for traditional customs, entertainment and special dishes in the cities. For this reason, I believe that traveling to own country is so efficient and economical.
Another reason that deserves some words here is that traveling in the own country is much more effective because of your mother language. When you seeking on your own country with the same language you can spend less time for finding enjoyable places and people have more hobby time.
Drawing from my own experiment when I was a little girl we have a trip to the Turkish and it was not so memorable because we spent all of our time in finding fun places during the streets in Turkish.
Moreover, we have a problem in shopping and it was not so comfortable for us.
Now I think it is certainly clear to say why I prefer my own country.
From what has been discussed above, I strongly believe that traveling in own country not only is so pleasant and comfortable but also is economically viable.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78658536585 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74216747317 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47256097561 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8753807878 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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