Do you agree or disagree with the following statement : Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public.
There are some moot points about whether media such as television, radio, newspaper and etc. Nowadays present accurate fact that they were in the past or not. The question of this matter has aroused as a subject of controversy among authorities. Everyone has their own zeitgeist. When it comes to my position I strongly subscribe to the point that media nowadays present true news and facts like they were in the past. I have some reasons two of which will be explicated hereunder.
The first reason worth discussing here is that in order to huge advancement in technology, there are various ways to acquire news about everything. Due to social networks and satellite television, there are plenty of channels which provide too many news from all over the world. In this situation, one media cannot present inaccurate news and facts. The wrong news will reveal very soon if they release fallacious news. As a case to the point, I vividly remember two days ago, I read a news about the cost of the contract between Iran national football team and a coach in the local newspaper which stated the cost very high and illogical. Consequently, I searched on the internet and found too many sources about the cost of that agreement. Some of this news was validated references and put this agreement content in their sites. My personal example competently corroborates to the point that today media cannot present wrong news because there is a vast source of news.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned is that nowadays, there are numerous demonstrators and critics who observe all media very well, therefore, if any media releases inaccurate news they will manifest this activity and penalty them. Thus, mass media try to decrease their wrong news and facts daily. My personal example demonstrates this reality in my country, there is a commission which has a duty to observe media. If any media has false manner od does not consider copy write the law, they can ban media activity. Hence, give rise to being this kind of commission media cannot present inaccurate things. My personal example shed some light to the point that nowadays there are strict laws to control media from releasing any false information.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons in this era due to a huge source of news and information media not only can release wrong news, but also should consider the strict laws and critics toward their activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ia such as television, radio, newspaper and etc. Nowadays present accurate fact that the...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...re plenty of channels which provide too many news from all over the world. In this s...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...re plenty of channels which provide too many news from all over the world. In this situat...
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Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one medium', 'a medium', or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: one medium; a medium; media
... all over the world. In this situation, one media cannot present inaccurate news and fact...
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Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...I vividly remember two days ago, I read a news about the cost of the contract between ...
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Line 2, column 973, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...because there is a vast source of news. By the same token, another paramount rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, kind of, such as, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90167865707 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57046600028 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513189448441 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6758696008 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136508263357 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465114550246 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266571503614 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909420482396 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126201233076 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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