Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is an essential part of people's lives. It is thought by some people that the government should spend money on universities rather than on the education of children. However, I am of the opinion that the government should take it seriously to invest money in elementary school. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, it is essential to consider that the government should prioritize the education of young students first. Even though the need for improvement of universities is always high, children are the center of the attention for everyone. If young learners do not have enough support from the government, which is the only institution that cares the most for their well being, then non of the private organization would take action to spend money on their education. For example, the majority of private organizations are build to gain profits, but the government approach toward education is completely different. Thus, they do see the big picture of developing something effective and sustainable for that generation. Overall, the investment in education of youths is more worth it than any other investment in society.
On top of this, the government should invest money first in the education of young children because if children do not have sheer knowledge at that phase, they would not be able to follow further education. The basic knowledge is a necessity for children's development as individuals and later on as professionals who would serve the country. In addition, if the government provides allocation on the improvement of the children's education in the first place, that investment would ease the education system as a whole.Hence, the education system would be functional for all levels. For instance, when I was a child, the education system was not that advanced like it is nowadays. My generation lacked the utilities of the learning tools, which are very important in brain's development in a quick way. It took me and my friends in general to learn new advanced things long time because we did not have the most helpful learning tools, such as a calculator or computers. According to this, I believe that the government should make sure that children have their learning tools first, which would help them to study quick and effectively, so that they would be capable to attend universities later.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence
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Message: Consider replacing "in a quick way" with adverb for "quick"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in general, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 8.0752688172 433% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09113924051 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89478587996 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501265822785 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3804002236 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.294117647 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304373428138 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100789452325 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060711726895 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227810652777 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380268107067 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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