Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the increasing emphasis on education in society, people's attitude towards teachers is constantly changing. There are questions as to whether advisors were more appreciated and valued by community than they are nowadays, Some believe that it is true while others have negative attitudes. In my opinion, I completely disagree with above statement because of some reasons as below.
First of all, teachers now with professional backgrounds and profound knowledge deserve more appreciate as well as attention. To be more specific, whether in college or high school, it is easily to detect a number of high-quality tutors who not only graduate from excellent normal universities but also have specialized subject skills. With the counselor's ability mentioned above, it is convinced that they could educate numerous brilliant students and gain achievements in their positions. As a result, advisors should receive more gratitude and attention since they make a great contribution to education along with their outstanding accomplishments. On the contrary, in the past, teachers who taught at schools barely possessed comprehensive knowledge because they did not have an opportunity to accept professional training. Under these circumstances, the information they could instruct their pupils is also extremely limited so that it is difficult for them to be valued and appreciated by the whole society. Therefore, the community at present attaches more importance to instructors than before.
What is more, with the highly emphasis of education in the whole nation, tutors should equally receive more concern. It is widely acknowledged that the competition between countries in the future would be mainly for high-tech talents. In this case, more states now are more willing to invest in schools to cultivate native experts. Counselors, as the most important part of a school, are supported and cared by the country. For example, due to the attention of the society to tutors, their salaries have been greatly increased in many areas, which also means that their social status has constantly improved. In addition, Teachers' Day is on September 10th, people would celebrate this holiday and express their thanks to the instructors who have worked so hard to give them guidance when they were young. Hence, the nation gives much encouragement to the tutors who have made great contributions to the education.
Last but not least, in the past, when the productivity was pretty low. teachers did not obtain enough attention. A lot of children would join the work instead of go to school because their families were too poor to pay their tuition fees.From what discussed above, we could conclude ideas that education was neglected by many parents and they did not listen to the opinions from advisors. Therefore, counselors were less valued by the nation in the past.
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, we may reach the conclusion that in modern society tutors would get more appreciation and attention than in the last century since both the country and themselves have done a lot.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the contrary, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2600.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28455284553 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85581184827 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 807.3 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.985838254 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13636363636 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222608194056 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673278079564 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431924464003 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132458431659 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552326936971 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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