Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The teachers have the most considerable influences on a society. They foster our children who are foundation of our community. Appreciating teachers for their endevears for buliding a better future is essential. By that, we can increase their performances which in turn can cause more literate children. Some people believe that teachers were more appreciated in the past; others consider otherwise. Personally speaking, I agree with the latter groups because of two reasons.
First, today there are a lot of ceremonies for cherishing teachers. In these cermoneys, students and goverments hold a sophisticated party and give them a vast number of presents. For example, in my country, we have a special day called 'the techers' day'. In this day, students bring a lot flowers and presents for techers. In this day, principals usually closes the last class to hold a ceremony in the school hall. In this party, studends recite poets to endeare teachers and showing greatfulness for their hard works. Finally, principals give special presents to techers for appreciating their diligents. So, todays teachers are appreciated more by holding ceremonies.
Second, teachers are respected more by society and government. When people see their former teachers who maybe have not seen for decaded, show their respect by saying a warm greeting and a smill. Government appreciates teachers by giving a bonus and other monetary presents. For instance, my older sister is teacher for about seventeen years. Some times, when I and she are walking in a street, we see a person come to her and shows her respect by envoking good memories from my sister's classes. Furthermore, a while ago my sister received a frame and a bonus from her school's presidents for bringing up students with the best grades in the region. In sum, nowadys, teachers are respected more by former students and principals.
All and all, I believe teachers have been appreciated more than the past because there are innumberable ceremonies to cherish them and they are respected more by people and goverment.
- TPO 52 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- TPO 37 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets dogs cats or other animals although there are better uses for this money Use specific reasons and example 60
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... on a society. They foster our children who are foundation of our community. Appreciati...
Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to hold a ceremony in the school hall. In this party, studends recite poets to en...
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
...nteen years. Some times, when I and she are walking in a street, we see a person co...
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_AND_ALL
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all in all' (=after all, nevertheless)?
Suggestion: All in all
...ore by former students and principals. All and all, I believe teachers have been appreciat...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16417910448 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82728329907 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0573318658 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155664559228 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542040126467 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573026359138 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118337197898 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546392342618 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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