Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers play the pivotal role in the student's life. Some people believe that nowadays, society appreciate and give the value to the teachers the same as it was in the past. However, I think that nowadays teachers are not getting the proper value equivalent to their enormous contributions to our society. I firmly believe this way because of several reasons and I will elaborate on this in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, nowadays, with the advent of internet we get access to all the information anywhere and anytime. Therefore, students hardly think that the lectures by their teachers are not that important. In fact, they think that they can get those information even without the help of their teacher. They don't appreciate his teaching and this influences other students adverse. My opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, during my graduation I used to attend classes regularly. But I remember there were a group of students who always tried to make chaos in the class. They were not at all attentive and showed no respect to our professors. Many students who initially used to listen to the professor got negatively influenced by them. As a result, they started loosing out interest in study and they failed the final examination. For this reason, if they have been attentive during the lecture, they would have never lost one of their vital year of life.
Secondly, teachers bring the commendable qualities like discipline, kindness in our life. They not only enrich us by sharing their valuable knowledge but also play a significant role in improving the leaderships, organizational, socialization skills as well. But, nowadays, society, more specifically, the young generation put least importance on these and they think their teachers are speaking rubbish. It has nothing to do with their daily life. Moreover, it won't help them to make their future prosperous. Drawing from my own experience, last week, when the math teacher of my brother came to home , my mother asked the teacher about the progress of my brother. Then, he pointed out some mistakes my brother made in the last unit test. From the very immediate moment, my brother started behaving very weird and was making some faces by staring at his teacher. Although my teacher tried to convince my mother that he would eventually improve through practice to make my brother feel good, but my brother continued to behave the same way. Moreover, by seeing this, a few of his friends also started to copy him. For this reason, it is certainly clear that nowadays students don't show respects to their teachers.
To sum up, in the light of the above mentioned points, I strongly believe that teacher are not getting the proper appreciation and the value as they deserve.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
Teachers play the pivotal role in the students life. Some people believe that nowadays...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
.... In fact, they think that they can get those information even without the help of their teacher....
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...without the help of their teacher. They dont appreciate his teaching and this influe...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'put the least'.
Suggestion: put the least
...more specifically, the young generation put least importance on these and they think thei...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... math teacher of my brother came to home , my mother asked the teacher about the p...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... certainly clear that nowadays students dont show respects to their teachers. To ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ciation and the value as they deserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, i think, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01284796574 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68836623036 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531049250535 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3910934058 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7037037037 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2962962963 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179421191984 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521470305189 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403343387338 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126692848522 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319715352223 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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