Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The constant technological development of our society let people make accomplishments, which our ancestors might not have ever dreamed about. Personally, I think that technology has embellished humans` life. There are a few reasons why I hold this opinion.
First of all, transport technology has made it possible for modern people to travel around the world at a fast pace and in comfortable conditions. Indeed, barely a century ago, citizens of different countries could voyage the world only by horses or by slow sea vessels. Very often, the traveling was an exhausting and time-consuming adventure. Nowadays, with the availability of advanced cars, trains, and air crafts, people can cross continents just in a few hours. My own experience is a good example of that. By my own vehicle, I travel a lot around the United States. My car makes each of my journeys special since it is well-equipped for convenient driving. It has GPS and cruise control systems to operate the vehicle, as well as an air conditioner and heated seats, which help to maintain a pleasant temperature inside the automobile. If I had not owned such a progressive car, I would not have enjoyed a traveling. To that end, the contemporary transportation has given me an opportunity to explore the world.
Secondly, communication technology lets people stay in touch with their loved ones continuously, while being away from them on a long distance. Cell phones, laptops, and tablets are modern portative devices with numerous programs and apps such as Skype and Viber, which make it real for us to connect remotely. This advantage is crucial for those individuals, who spend plenty of time away from their homes. For instance, as I said above, I like traveling, so, I am out of my home a lot. Even though, I can talk to my family and friends at any moment because I always have a communication tool as a smart phone on hand. It lets me share my experience, pictures, and videos of places I visit with my beloved ones. As a result, I have never felt lonely while voyaging, despite the fact that most of the time, I voyage alone.
In conclusion, I strongly believe, that technology makes life enjoyable and fascinating. This is because it helps people visit new places and interact with each other
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90932642487 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96776895233 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616580310881 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.25156024 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1363636364 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106322769314 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304773180256 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312153293648 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708688824437 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147770384871 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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