Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are an influx of researches in various fields such as psychology, social sciences... which shows the significant positive impact of sports and social activities on young adults. Although many people believes the major of the university's funding must be dedicated to studying and classes, I think social activities should be supported financially equal for the following reasons:
First of all, it is important for students to be encourages in group activities and learn how to work as a team and in which can we bring about this trait among student better than sports?. Participating in a lot of competitions would be an excellent practice to bring students closer together.
Additionally, human nature desires entertainment and overlooking this urge would result depression and a lots of other psychological problems among students. A university that doesn’t provide enough opportunities for all students to participate in social activities such as music bands, poem sessions and athletic competitions, would end up with students who are obsessed with their studying without the enthusiasm needed for success. For example, in my university, Sharif university of Technology, there is significant lack of social activities and studying is the only priority of the students and despite the high level of education of the university which is renown in the country, everyone opinion of our students is some depressed young boys and girls who care about nothing but their grades.
As another reason, I should mention that some achievements in national sports competitions can make the university a huge fame. There are a lot of top universities which have gained their reputations by some medals in students Olympics and other major students’ tournaments.
In conclusion, supporting university in social activities not only wouldn’t harm the state of university in another areas, but also would encourage students to be more active and passionate about their college life. As a result, we would have better students, in the aspect of studying as well as so many other important aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4103343465 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09008985556 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.098729361 48.9658058833 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.818181818 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9090909091 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 5.45110844103 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1719299816 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670574303582 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548888557343 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107306082017 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563619782154 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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