Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Regarding the issue of whether all university students should be required to take history courses no matter whatever their major is, different people hold divergent opinions. Some would maintain it is not required because it make students tired to learn the additional things. I partly agree with their notions. However, from my point of view, I attach great importance for students to taking history courses no matter what their fied of study is.
Firstly, studying the history benefits your future life which can prevent you from making the failures that already made by some people ahead of you. As is known to all, China has a long history which can date back 5000 years. There are numerous emperors and great people in such a long period and what we can learn from it can never be calculated. Consider my own experience can shed some light on this issue. I was a person with too much self-confidence. I thought the students who scored lower than me can't compare to me in all aspects. But in one day, I read about a story in ancient China which tells a talented boy looking down to all people and finally did nothing because no one wanted to be his friends. I always appreciate this story for helping me out from self-confidence and prevent the serious condition.
Secondly, you can be inspired from the history courses and figure out innovation. There is an old saying in China: Studying the history can inspire you and make you smarter. It is really true for many scholars. According to a survey, there are over seventy percent of all scientists and experts in China like reading history books and taking history courses in their leisure time. I contends that is reason why they can always come out the brilliant idea that our common people can't come out. The inspiration of history is enormous and beneficial.
It is undeniable that some students can feel exhausted when they have to add a history course to their already full schedule. But I believe they will appreciate that if they find the inspiring points they can acquire from it. Nothing can compare to the benefit of improving themselves constantly.
To sum up, whereas there is an argument for the unnecessary of taking history courses for university students, namely feeling worn out and upset, preventing making further failures, coupled with getting inspiration from it makes a strong case that it is necessary for all university students are required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86150234742 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54250060573 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525821596244 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5790174508 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1363636364 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323486725809 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913676582315 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936771422377 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204322012576 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124752293901 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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