Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people think always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people while others may disagree with the statement. In my opinion, I think telling the truth is the most important and appreciable way of having a stable relationship than reinforcing the relationship by concealing the truth. I think this way for several reasons and facts behind my reasoning will be elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.

First and foremost, any long-term relationship built on trust and trust comes with the revelation of truth in every circumstance either good or bad. By following the rule of telling the truth will build the feeling of relying on people and make a faithful relation which will be long-lasting. For example, my supervisor has always advised me telling the truth every time whether the situation is really bad or not. I’ve always followed his advice and we have a stable and steady relationship so long.

In addition to the previous point, any relationship keeps going on the honesty of the associated people whereas honesty comes from the truth. An honest revelation of facts will increase the understanding between people leading to a healthier relationship. Moreover, it’s our responsibility as a human being to take the responsibility of the aftermath comes from hiding the truth and history has taught us that it was never good. To explain this, while I was in my college, I had a roommate who was like a brother to me. we had shared our bed, studied together and even hang out together. Once I had to prepare his term paper while he was sick. Later on, when I had found that he was not actually ill and took advantage of my honesty, I ended the relationship.

In sum, owing to aforementioned reasonable causes and elucidations described in previous paragraphs, it appears to be good to draw the well-founded conclusion that, telling the truth all the time is more beneficent than lying in order to keep our relationship healthier and reliable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, may, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, while, for example, i think, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02388059701 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00735861455 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540298507463 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2564445761 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246713375167 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834416473574 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090435799672 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156870454515 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101831067096 0.0645574589148 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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