Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every person yearns for a relationship which he can trust or that will be beneficial to him. In this search, he has been constantly searching for definite traits in other people for which he can build a sound relationship with him. While some people stipulate truthfulness as the most important characteristics, I think it is not always necessary to be veritable with your partner in case of building a good relationship with someone because it may lead to heartbreak and sometimes cause in jeopardy in relation also.
Every religion has glorified truthfulness as one of the greatest virtue a human can practice. So, it is undeniable that, being honest with someone will obviously build a healthy relationship with anybody. Nevertheless, in this sophisticated modern world, human relationship has also become complicated as well. That is why, always telling the truth will not be helpful while maintaining a relationship, as it can sometimes hurt the person on the listening side. For example, let us consider, a healthy well maintained person has got a friend who is obese. May be the cause of his obesity is genetic, may be he can suffer from some hormonal disruption. But if the healthy friend continuously keep telling him obese, fat, thick, whatsoever, it will sure strike the emotional balance of that obese person. Despite being honest, being straightforward does not help here anyway. On the other hand, if he would tell that, he looks good but he should contemplate on losing some weight, that would eventually, encourage him somehow, which is the role of a generous friend.
Besides, now-a-days our jobs have also become so convoluted that we can not share those thing on the assumption that we will be truthful whatever happens. Even the Russian security service, known as KGB, has an ingrained rule whereby their employees can not share anything with their spouses also, along with prohibiting anyone from touching their personal purse or money-bag. Doing otherwise can cause the employee lose his job, if anything, being sentenced for leaking information. Thus, we should not always follow the maxims about truthfulness.
Furthermore, and most importantly, telling the obvious thing every time may jeopardize the relation between people. For example, in an office, sometimes employees make jokes about their boss, but if the boss, in case, asks someone about his popularity among his colleagues, disclosing those petty merrymaking will surely cause everyone listen the boss speaking daggers. In this case, being candid will thereby worsen the existing situation.
Therefore, it can be concluded that, we should not blindly state the actual fact although it is a positive trait. Rather, we should be aware of the situation about the time and place of being veracious. Thus, I do not think, truthfulness is the most important characteristics one should look for in everybody.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 513, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...sometimes cause in jeopardy in relation also. Every religion has glorified trut...
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Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...rson has got a friend who is obese. May be the cause of his obesity is genetic, ma...
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Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...be the cause of his obesity is genetic, may be he can suffer from some hormonal disrup...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'those things'?
Suggestion: this thing; those things
...ome so convoluted that we can not share those thing on the assumption that we will be truth...
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Line 17, column 70, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
...d that, we should not blindly state the actual fact although it is a positive trait. Rather...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 9.8082437276 275% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2443.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2312633833 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90054663292 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537473233405 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9549019597 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.045454545 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2272727273 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142337439488 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474378280814 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492994884787 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810516149867 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281597547175 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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