Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Trouble comes with mess. It is very important for us to prepare our future. Nowadays, we have to deal with plenty of issues. Therefore, if you cannot put them in an order, you will suffer failure. Planning and preparing of the future is crucial to our success and is benefit for our competition.
One person who have clear plan for the future can live an efficient life. In daily life, we always meet some problems. Even we cannot know what will happen in the future but most of the time, we can guess what will happen. So. if we have a plan before we face the troubles, we can deal with them easier and save our time.
Organize for the future can make our mind clear. There are a great deal of things every day. Some of them are urgent, some of them are important. Therefore, we have to let ourselves understand what we should do first. Planning for one day is the best way to remind us. By this way, we do the urgent work first and we also have time to tackle the difficulty jobs. The clear mind is essential for us, so, we eager to make efficient plan for the work days.
The plan of the future can give person motivation of work. During our busy lift, we sometimes feel that we lost the energy and direction of life. Because we often forget the goal of our work. But an organization keep us know what I am fight for. The recent plan can tell us what should we do next day. The future plan can teach us do not stop. The plan like a banner that marks every step of our lift, then we will not lose direction.
Lift like a forest and we get missing easily. The plan of future like the banners can lead us to travel through the forest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
... make our mind clear. There are a great deal of things every day. Some of them are u...
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Line 13, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... lost the energy and direction of life. Because we often forget the goal of our work. B...
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Line 13, column 345, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e future plan can teach us do not stop. The plan like a banner that marks every ste...
^^^
Line 17, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n we will not lose direction. Lift like a forest and we get missing easily....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27301587302 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08703058172 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501587301587 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7228359106 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.84 100.406767564 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64 5.45110844103 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160055937152 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601653443178 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419167466061 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105697640677 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385185045889 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 11.7677419355 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.1575268817 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.