Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, with the advent of technology development, life is way more complicated than it was in the past. There is a controversy among people about whether they need to have capacity for planing and organizing to survive on this sophisticated life or not. Some people believe that there is no need to have a specific plan for obtaining a good career for the living, while others think that a well-organized plan establishes more success toward the life of individuals. I personally agree with the former idea due to the fact that well-organized plan put the people in a better position in every aspect of life. I will substantiate my main reasons in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, a well-organized plan for short, medium and long goals is essential for being successful. A way of being successful is to put efforts for establishing an achievement, and this is impossible without having a good plan. Besides, since it’s living in this cruel and real world is difficult for everyone, people would be depressed without having a plan to organize their stuff. For instance, when I was a middle school student, I spent most of my daily times hanging around with friends and staying out too late for playing. Therefore, it affects my middle school grades and I made my parents and teachers disappointed. Consequently, this situation makes me so nervous and depression and it lasts for several months.
Secondly, people are feeling satisfied by having a plan in their life. They are sure about the fact that they are very productive in their life and also would not waste any second. In addition, their self-esteem will be increased, so they have better social communication. Take my friend’s experience as an example. When he started his high school, he picked a very hard maths class. Then, by working hard every day and assign some short term and long term goals for his plan, he finally could completed the course with A and kept good quality of assignments. And also, since he got appreciation from his teacher, more people are willing to communicate with him about academic study. In this way, he became more confident and believe in himself.
To conclude, because of the increasing difficulty of living, a well-organized plan will not only bring success and achievements in every aspect of life but also will make people believe in themselves and trust in their abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'complete'
...rm goals for his plan, he finally could completed the course with A and kept good quality...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96790123457 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89281784109 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535802469136 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2755372834 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219678040713 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692296330399 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488090550986 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137117979043 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551516587544 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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