Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The new era has brought many changes and challenges. As humans are experiencing the modern world, they may need to adopt to these new and quick changes in order to enjoy the life. There have been many controversial debates about whether humans are less satisfied with their living experience today. I profoundly believe in today's world have several opportunities to be happy and to enjoy the life. This essay will discuss this matter.
First of all, with the recent advances in technology people have better access to a wide variety of entertainment facilities. Having an advanced smartphone, people can have access to the Internet with many great online service which are amusing and pleasant. Young people can play various online games with their friends at home or at clubs. Students have access to many academic resources to do research about almost any phenomenon, event or scientific concept. People need to develop many skills to be capable of resolving problems professionally, so they can improve their potential abilities through, for instance, online courses which are plentiful on the Internet. My own experience is a compelling example of this matter. I am a software developer and because of the type of my job, I have to update my knowledge every day. So, I used many Internet resources while I am working which help me to build well-established software solutions. For this reason, it is obvious that people's lives have become easier just by using technology and its informative services.
In addition, another significant point to be mention is that people in the past had to work harder and for more hours to provide for their families and sometimes they had to perform many different tasks. However, in today's world people need to learn and obtain some set of skills to find a suitable job which allows them to concentrate on improving their skills and then fulfill some tasks accurately. Moreover, people mostly work 5 days a week and fewer hours have given them the opportunity to spend more time with their friends and family. So, they can enjoy the life by doing what they desire with the ones they care about most. For example, I remember my grand father used to work as a chef when he was young and he told us that he had to work 2 shifts in a day to afford life expenses properly. He was not satisfied until he retired because he could not spend more time with his family. Therefore, people today should appreciate the opportunity they have and enjoy wonderful moments in life.
In conclusion, people in today's world have access to a wide variety of facilities including educational and entertainment which can help them learn new things and enjoy the life. People in the past had some difficulties comparing to out time because they had to work harder and had less time to spend on what they desire. Therefore, we have to appreciate what we have and we should acknowledge great moments of out lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...cing the modern world, they may need to adopt to these new and quick changes in order to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ilies and sometimes they had to perform many different tasks. However, in todays world people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2435.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86027944112 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65312636819 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489021956088 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 773.1 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5024968089 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.458333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205444606837 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613080268851 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403028799085 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127574436283 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223338996908 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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