Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As time elapses, education get more and more attention since it has pivotal role on improvement of any society. In this regard, educational spectators include different novel approaches to improve gradually the quality of education. With this in mind, some believe that cell phone, internet games, and social media waste the time of students and prevent them from studying, while others look at this concept from a distinctive perspective and hold this opinion that such high-tech devices and internet can be instructive for quite a few reasons, two of which are as follows.
For one thing, although cell phone and internet seems to be like a distraction for studying, they are able to be useful instructive methods to assist teachers who are intend to add some novel techniques and avenue for teaching students. In other words, engineers invented a great number of practical software to help students with their assignments through teaching information by pragmatic and realistic examples. Such fancy programs cause teenagers not only play and have enjoyable time but learn their important subjects or do their homework, as well.
Another equally momentous reason that should be mentioned is that by applying online games in the realm of education, students can compete with each other over gaining more scores while they are learning more information. What I mean is, juveniles can spend a great deal of time on playing online games, meanwhile they compete with their peers over doing their assignments and learning as much as they can. Additionally, this approach would be fascinating, especially for both parents and students for this reason that students can learn information through playing games, and parents know that their children do not waste their time since for winning the games they should learn materials and do their assignments.
To sum it up, according to all reasons and points were discussed above, I strongly assert that today, educating students are easier that past since educational software can assist teachers to instruct their students, and by means of online games, teenagers can learn competition over learning and doing their homework.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... instructive methods to assist teachers who are intend to add some novel techniques and...
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Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'intended'.
Suggestion: intended
...tive methods to assist teachers who are intend to add some novel techniques and avenue...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, while, i mean, for one thing, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28034682081 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65562274922 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7687282085 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.7 100.406767564 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17880030011 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776883088016 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430706027848 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111566878509 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352865019936 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 11.7677419355 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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