Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In contemporary society, it is essential for people to secure their future. Indeed, everybody should build up his or her success and makes an endeavor for that. Nowadays according to the social atmosphere, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than just keep the way that they already know everything about that. So, as I mentioned, I strongly agree with prompt working even with considering the risk of making mistakes. I would like to put forward some of the most significant reasons to illustrate my standpoint.
First and foremost, in the information age and in the rapidly changing environment of science and technology, work competition between people increased. Actually, every person tries to make his or her best effort for gaining the best things in life. As a result, when you just perform your ordinary duties, you cannot progress in the future. By the way, it is inevitable to make mistakes with rapidly working, but you can correct your mistakes in your spare time. On the other hand, when you perform your job fast, you can save your time for learning something else. As an example, learning another language could be an option for extra times. Conclusively, you can foster your talents and be your life`s hero. In my perspective, time is a treasure in our live. So, we can utilize from time to be more talented.
Moreover, by working slowly and make sure that everything is correct, you will miss your chance to be creative in your job. Admittedly, with doing ordinary tasks you have not any chance for testing yourself about other activities. Indeed, by making mistakes you learn some strategies to address problems and this job can make you creative. Because you gain experience from your errors.
Last but not least, needless to say, that, even the most enthusiastic people get tired after doing something for a long time. If you just do your duty and every time care about have not any mistake, your job will become a boring duty for you. Apparently, you would not enjoy about your job and give up your opportunities for your brilliant future.
To sum up, working fast can be more time efficient for people and by saving time we can foster our abilities and build up our bright future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ems and this job can make you creative. Because you gain experience from your errors. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, as a result, by the way, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8359375 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57245140657 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526041666667 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9909917589 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4090909091 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294973587725 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925272569232 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850806854453 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174561727607 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907057086561 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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