Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Along with the accelerating pace of life, the modern human has faced difficulties in doing his tasks and catching up with that speed. In this situation, some believe that we must work as quickly as possible to fulfil our various duties; while others think it is not proper to trade off accuracy with speed. I myself believe that we should not precipitate our working in order to cover as many as we can. Instead, we ought to be careful about details and tend to be meticulous in our careers. I try to elaborate on my points in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I think that doing less with more precision is far better than accomplishing a lot with lower accuracy. Nowadays, most businesses acquire accurate works and the managers care about every nuance these days. Hence, if one is going to be successful and illustrious in his future career, he should express proper precision in his works. As a realistic example, I remember me and my classmate at college. I used to do my homeworks and projects slovenly and without a certain manner, while my friend tended to be thoroughgoing and paid attention to every word in her reports. As it may seem obvious, she ended up as a top manager in a high class company, while I am still seeking a well paid job.
Second, being organized and meticulous helps us to have a clear and serene mind. When you get used to doing your duties step by step at a reasonable pace, your mind would be calm during the working process. On the contrary, if you try to accelerate your pace to an unreasonable level, your mind would be obsessed with doing things as quickly as possible and you probably miss your focus on the current task. In this manner, not only you ruin your work's quality, but also you lose the evenness of your mind. For instance, while my friend at college used to be calm all the time, I was always worried about the next due task. At the end, that sort of habit embroiled me with severe anxiety, and I had to visit a psychologist for a long time on a regular basis to overcome that.
In general, I think that we should not be overthinking obut the insane speed of life in the modern era. human's brain has a certain capacity and we should not exceed our functional limits in order to achive more in this chaotic world. I believe that it is better for ourselves to stay even and try to do our duties step by step in a calm manner. this tendency will help us to achieve more precision and also more composure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, so, still, well, while, for instance, i think, in general, sort of, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46460176991 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49657530328 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524336283186 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7322770022 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0952380952 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148366547728 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436058289395 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416684921463 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895847647522 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176496362942 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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